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1、專題39 書面表達(dá) 一、 江蘇淮安 Ⅶ. 書面表達(dá) 76.為迎接祖國(guó)母親第70個(gè)生日，學(xué)校開展了豐寓多彩的活動(dòng)，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請(qǐng)圍繞該話題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)： 1．你看到或參加過(guò)一次活動(dòng)（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、經(jīng)過(guò)）； 2．你對(duì)該活動(dòng)的感受以及對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛(ài)之情； 3．你今后如何為建設(shè)祖國(guó)貢獻(xiàn)力量。 注意: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名; 2. 詞數(shù)在80～100, 已給出的文字不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖國(guó)），____________________

2、_________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案

3、】To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland In order to welcome the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. It's the greatest

4、museum I've ever seen.We saw many weapons that used by the the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. there are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my

5、 motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future. 【解析】為迎接祖國(guó)母親第70個(gè)生日，學(xué)校開展了豐寓多彩的活動(dòng)，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請(qǐng)圍繞該話題寫一篇短文?？忌紫纫J(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。 二、江蘇連云港 76.書面表達(dá) 76. 減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更

6、多的課余時(shí)間。某校英語(yǔ)角就“如何讓課余生活更有意義？”展開了討論，大家各抒己見。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 注意： (1)短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫; (2)詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); (3)短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。 (4)參考詞匯：提升素養(yǎng)promote literacy How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students hav

7、e much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

9、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare ti

10、me more meaningful? My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we

11、can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy. 【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如何讓課外生活更有意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容

12、。 亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 三、江蘇蘇州 第七部分書面表達(dá) 56.假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯(cuò)誤，倍感懊

13、惱，寫了一封郵件向你訴說(shuō)，為幫助他排解困感，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷．用英語(yǔ)回信開導(dǎo)他。 To：subua@ From： Subjects： Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hue, I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me? u Do you ag

14、ree that everyone makes mistakes? u Can you tell me one of your mistakes? u How did you deal with your problem? u What have you learned from the mistake? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Nathan 注意： l.詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞量； 2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文

15、連貫、通順； 3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 Dear Nathan, I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ______________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hop

16、e my experience can help you out. Best wishes Su Hua 【答案】Dear Nathan, I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes. Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forg

17、ot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand y

18、ou. Then you will feel much better. I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes. Su Hua 【解析】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I fou

19、nd it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。 四、江蘇泰州 81

20、.書面表達(dá) 為豐富初三學(xué)生課余生活，上周末你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹此次活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿? 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念； 2．下午參觀市民廣場(chǎng)：觀看圖片展，了解祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。 你的感想： 1．師生情深，感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助； 2．倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)效祖國(guó)； 3. ……（考生自己發(fā)揮） 要求： 1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。 2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括內(nèi)容提示中所提供的信息，并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。 3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯：市民廣場(chǎng)C

21、ivic Square In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

22、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All th

23、e teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. I

24、n People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country. 【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下上周末你校所組織的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。所提供的材料中列舉了活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

25、和你的感想。主要從：1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念；2．下午參觀市民廣場(chǎng)：觀看圖片展，了解祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。以及表達(dá)師生情深，感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助；倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)效祖國(guó)；（自己在發(fā)揮一些）。這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。 【高分句型一】 I would like to thank my t

26、eachers and classmates for their help. 我要感謝我的老師和同學(xué)們的幫助。 該句話用到了would like to do sth. 豐富了語(yǔ)言。 【高分句型二】 In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民廣場(chǎng)，我們看了70年來(lái)的攝影展，了解了祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。該句話的語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，層次分明，語(yǔ)意明確，用簡(jiǎn)單的句子表達(dá)

27、了豐富的內(nèi)涵。使人讀起來(lái)郎朗上口。 五、江蘇宿遷 七、書面表達(dá) 81.某軟件公司為了開發(fā)一款適合中學(xué)生在課后學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的app，邀請(qǐng)你一起參與設(shè)計(jì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文提示，用英語(yǔ)向該公司介紹你的構(gòu)想。 名稱 Happy English Learning 內(nèi)容 英語(yǔ)類的新聞、電影、歌曲、游戲等。 好處 1. 便于和同學(xué)一起學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)； 2. 幫助學(xué)生擴(kuò)大詞匯量； 3. 有利于提高英語(yǔ)聽力； 4. ……（自主發(fā)揮，至少一點(diǎn)） 其他方面 ……（自主發(fā)揮，至少一點(diǎn)） 注意事項(xiàng)： 1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); 2.內(nèi)容要包括表中要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適

28、當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通暢; 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名、地名等; Here is my design for the new app. ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

29、_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and s

30、o on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing Eng

31、lish songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app. I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages. 【解析】這篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如and so on，make it easy，in English study，watch films，in a word，have fun，be suitable for等。而固定句型It

32、can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。 六、 江蘇鎮(zhèn)江 七、書面表達(dá) 66.假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的

33、李華，每周五下午你校開設(shè)校本必修課(required course)與選修課(elective course),請(qǐng)介紹必修課Travel of Science, 根據(jù)個(gè)人情況選擇一門選修課并說(shuō)明理由；同時(shí)，對(duì)你的選擇的課程提出建議。 Required course Elective Course Subject Travel of science l introducing scientists and inventions Subject Photography l taking photos Gardening l growing flowers

34、 Teacher a professor Teacher a young reporter 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. School’s garden Time & Place l 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m. l school hall Time & Place l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. l City Park An old gardener Tip take notebooks and pens Tip Take cameras tools offered by school

35、 要求： 1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括必修課及一門選修課的所有信息； 2. 對(duì)你所選擇的一門選修課說(shuō)明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議； 3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。 【答案】Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and the

36、ir inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two e

37、lective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the c

38、ourse to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors. 【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校周五下午安排的必修課和選修課程進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知，短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹必修課程Travel of science，題目中利用表格的形式展示了這個(gè)課程的主要內(nèi)容、老師、上課的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及小提示，學(xué)生們根據(jù)表格用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)即可；接下來(lái)應(yīng)根據(jù)個(gè)人情況，從表格中提供的兩門選修課中選擇一個(gè)，闡述自己的理由，并對(duì)該課程提出一些建議。這一部分需要學(xué)生們展開想象，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，補(bǔ)充具體的內(nèi)容，再

39、用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文應(yīng)包括題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，而且注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，使敘述清晰、完整、有條理。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容，主次分明。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)自然。文中較好的短語(yǔ)和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor,

40、who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to t

41、ake photos outdoors.等等。 七、 江蘇南通 八、書面表達(dá) 81.假如你是李明，請(qǐng)參考《南通市初中學(xué)生綜合索質(zhì)評(píng)價(jià)方案》的相關(guān)指標(biāo)，對(duì)你本學(xué)期的突出優(yōu)點(diǎn)和明顯不足進(jìn)行總結(jié)，舉例佐證優(yōu)點(diǎn)并針對(duì)不足提出改進(jìn)措施，完成一份自評(píng)小結(jié)。 注意：1. 圖表中的內(nèi)容不需要面面俱到，不要逐條翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。 Self-assessment I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it’s necessary for me

42、 to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

43、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

44、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Self-assessment I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it's necessary for me to find

45、 out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. I have a good study habit. I can listen to the teacher and review carefully after class. I am a helpful person. I like to interact with my classmates. I have

46、a good citizenship. I try to innovate knowledge. I also have a good sense of aesthetics. I think I am a good student. 【解析】假如你是李明，請(qǐng)參考《南通市初中學(xué)生綜合索質(zhì)評(píng)價(jià)方案》的相關(guān)指標(biāo)，對(duì)你本學(xué)期的突出優(yōu)點(diǎn)和明顯不足進(jìn)行總結(jié)，舉例佐證優(yōu)點(diǎn)并針對(duì)不足提出改進(jìn)措施，完成一份自評(píng)小結(jié)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭

47、配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. 八、 江蘇揚(yáng)州 B. 寫作 81.俗話說(shuō)“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”。近日某英文報(bào)正在舉行題為”My Neighbourhood”的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李雷，住在花園社區(qū)，根據(jù)以下流程圖提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。 Conditions Neighbourhood Wh

48、at is your neighbourhood like? Neighbours What are your neighbours like? How do they help others?(give two examples) What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example) Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood? 要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括流程圖中所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3

49、）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。 My neighbourhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

50、___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My neighbourhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green t

51、rees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighbourhood, there is a supermarket, a bank a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbours are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Li’s daughter was il

52、l, and her husband was not at home. So her neighbours helped her send her daughter to hospital. Grandma Liu is old and her children are not around. She lives alone. So our neighbours often helps her wash dishes and clean up her house. I think I should do something for my neighbourhood. So every week

53、 I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them. This is my neibourhood. Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here. 【解析】這篇作文要求我們以My neighbourhood為題，寫一篇文章，介紹自己居住的社區(qū)。題目中利用流程圖的形式列出了文章中應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)以此為依據(jù)，組織語(yǔ)言，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹自己居住的社區(qū)環(huán)境

54、；接下來(lái)介紹自己的鄰居是什么樣的，并舉例說(shuō)明鄰居們之間是如何互相幫助的，以及你自己為社區(qū)所做的事情；最后表達(dá)自己對(duì)社區(qū)的感受。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先應(yīng)將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在內(nèi)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)，但注意要切合主題，不能寫不沾邊的話。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫?、短語(yǔ)和詞匯。句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他高級(jí)句式，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文

55、意銜接自然，表達(dá)流暢。短文里使用的較好的句型有：There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it.、When someone has problems, they must help him、I think I should do something for my neighbourhood.、So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.、Though it is not big, I feel luc

56、ky and happy to live here.等等。 九、 江蘇常州 八、書面表達(dá) 60.隨著電腦的普及，許多中國(guó)學(xué)生逐漸忽視書寫。針對(duì)該現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向?？陡澹U述書寫的重要性。 你的觀點(diǎn) 電腦普及時(shí)代書寫依然重要 你的理由 1．書寫是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的一個(gè)重要組成部分，所以練習(xí)書寫有助于傳承文化； 2．每個(gè)人的字跡都有個(gè)人意義，例如手寫書信更能表達(dá)情感； 3．……（再自擬至少一個(gè)理由并加以闡述） 注意： 1. 必須包括表中所有提示內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 3. 表達(dá)清楚，

57、語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范； 4. 詞數(shù)不少于90字（文章開頭已經(jīng)給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 參考詞匯：handwriting 書法；字跡；書寫（不可數(shù)名詞）inherit 傳承（及物動(dòng)詞） Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important. ______________________

58、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案

59、】Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important. Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. Everyone's han

60、dwriting has personal meaning, for example, handwritten letters can express emotions better. I also think handwriting can improve students’ handwriting skill and interests; for another, it can teach students to love Chinese characters. In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve bot

61、h their bodies and minds. For middle school students, it is quite beneficial to write beautiful and generous words. So it is necessary to hold handwriting contests among students. 【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下書寫的重要性。所提供的材料中列舉了你的觀點(diǎn)和理由。主要從電腦普及時(shí)代書寫依然重要（觀點(diǎn)）、理由：1．書寫是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的一個(gè)重要組成部分，所以練習(xí)書寫有助于傳承文化；2．每個(gè)人的字跡都

62、有個(gè)人意義，例如手寫書信更能表達(dá)情感；3. 提高學(xué)生的書寫技能和興趣。4. 可以教學(xué)生熱愛(ài)漢字。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須材料卡片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。 【高分句型一】 I think that handwriting is still important. 我認(rèn)為書寫仍然很重要。 句子that handwriting is still important.是由t

63、hat引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。 【高分句型二】 Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. 書寫是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的一個(gè)重要組成部分，所以練習(xí)書寫有助于傳承文化。 （提出了書寫的重要性，照應(yīng)了作者的觀點(diǎn)——電腦普及時(shí)代書寫依然重要） 【高分句型三】 In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds.

64、 在我看來(lái)，練習(xí)書法能使學(xué)生提高身心素質(zhì)。 practicing handwriting是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。 十、江蘇南京 六、書面表達(dá)（滿分15分） 33．（15分）假如你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到英國(guó)B公司為正在開發(fā)的一款提高英語(yǔ)寫作能力的應(yīng)用軟件（app）征集網(wǎng)友建議．請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息，用英語(yǔ)給該公司寫一封電子郵件． IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explor

65、e ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！ Here' s what to do： Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！ Please let us know： ● What's the name of the app？ ● What problem does the app solve？ ● What does the app do？

66、 Contact us at appdesign @Britech com 注意 1．內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮． 2．詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）． 3．文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等． Dear Sir or Madam， Thanks for designing an app for English writing． ?。? Yours