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1、培養(yǎng)聽說讀寫技能的先決條件是說寫
【之三】張鐵城2016、10、4發(fā)送中國學生要重視寫的訓練必然會提高說的能力這是我們熟悉的英語教學大師亞歷山大的主張
“Speakingandwritingarethemostimportantoftheseskills,sincetosomeextent,theypresupposetheothertwo.”譯文:“說與寫在這幾種能力中，是最重要的，因為在某種程度上，這兩種能力是另外兩種能力的先決條件?！?
【見：亞歷山大(L.G.AIexander)在《新概念英語第二冊(全英語版p.viii)》】
遺憾的是|:我們北京高考的書面表達分數(shù)一直不高。20
2、09年北京英語高考書面表達滿分35分，但是平均分數(shù)只有17.5分，相當于100分的50分。
第五章《新加坡中學作文》準備向真正的英語原著過渡※比賽成績公布通知原文及四篇|一等獎獲獎作〒共計2,874個英語單詞。
No.6B第三節(jié)第二篇獲獎作文2008年新加坡南華中學作文比賽一等獎中二9班LeeSayHua
st1Prize---SecondaryTwoCategoryLeeSayHua(209)Lookingatherhigh,narrownosebridge,smallchinandfulllips,shewaslikeanimpeccableworkofart,andIwasthes
3、killedpainterwhocreatedher.Everyfeaturebestowedonherlovelyfacewasstraight,angular,andperfect.Shewasblindinglygorgeous,astunninghead-turner.Shestaredatherself,speechless,inthemirror.
“Whatdoyouthink?”Iaskedsmugly.
"It'…it's…unbelievable!Thankyousomuch.Dr.Lee!Youaretruly…amazing!”shestammered,before
4、burstingintorockingsobs.
“Shelooksgoodevenwhenshecries!”Ithoughtwithachuckle.
Examiningherprettymug,wavesofprideandsatisfactionrearedhighupandenvelopedme.Shelookedsodifferentfromwhenshefirstcametome.Herfracturednoseandprominentjawlinewereaputoff,butImanagedtotransformthemintofeaturesthatweremeantf
5、oragoddess.Afterurginghertostopcrying,shefinallyregainedhercomposureandpraisedmeendlesslyasifIwasatoddlerwhojustspokeherfirstwords.
“Youaresotalentedandpromising!I'mquitesuretheymeantitwhentheysaidthatyouhavetheMidastouch!”shegushedwithdelight.IwasnostrangertothesecommentsbutIstilllappedthemallup.A
6、fterall,whatwouldyouexpecttohearifyouwereanaccomplishedplasticsurgeonwhohasdonehundredsofsuccessfulsurgeriesforpeople?Tonnesofpraise.
Iwasquiteusedtothisnewenvironmentwherenothingreallyscaresmeanymore.AngelinaJolie,JessicaAlbaandevenBradPiffwannabesflocktomeforhelp.Aftermonthsandmonthsofexcruciatin
7、gpainforthepatientandhardworkformyteamandI,theendresultwouldalwaysberewarding.ThepatientwouldhavehisorherdesiredfaceandIwouldhaveyetanothersuccessfulrecordundermybelt.However,therewasonecase,wheretheendresultwasn'sopretty.
Itwasatthebeginningofmycareer.IhadjustgraduatedfrommedicalschoolandIyearnedt
8、obeaplasticsurgeon.NotonlybecauseofthebigfatpaycheckthatIwouldreceiveonceeverymonth,butthethoughtofhelpingpeoplechangetheirlivesforthebetterwasalltootempting.Iwasn'tasaint,butIwantedtofeelthesatisfactionIgetfromseeingmypatientsenjoyingtheirlivesafterhavingplasticsurgery.Thinkaboutthefreedom,attentio
9、nandhappinesstheywouldget!Thus,Ifurtheredstudiesandworkedhardtobecomeaplasticsurgeon.YearsofstudyingpaidoffwhenIwasacceptedasanapprenticetoawell-knowndoctor,Dr.Wong.Hewasarespectableman,famousforbeingthemostfocused,skilledandmeticulousmaninthebusiness.Thoughhehadanear-celebritystatus,hewasalwayspoli
10、teandpatientandneverletanyonedown.HetaughtmemanythingsandIabsorbedthemlikespongeabsorbedwater.Iwasveryeagertoperformmyfirstsurgerybuthealwaysremindedmetobepatient.
MybigbreakcamewhenDr.WongannouncedthatIwasgoodenoughtohandlethingsonmyown.Myfirstpatient,Andrea,wasapetiteyoungladywhofeltinferiorbecau
11、seofatoo-prominentnoseonhersmallface.Icarefullyexaminedherandexplainedtohertheproceduresofthesurgery.Ifeltveryconfidentofthisandthoughtthatnothingcouldpossiblygowrong.Itwasjustaminornosejobtome.IwasburningwithanticipationbutIdidn'trealizethatwhatfeltsominortomewasawholedifferentthingforAndrea.Notonl
12、ywouldshehaveanewnose,shewouldgainawholenewlife.Itwouldaffectthewaypeoplethoughtofheranditwouldchangeherfutureanddesires.Ididn'tstepintoAndrea'sshoesandthatwasahugemistake.ThemomentIpickedupmysurgerytools,myhandsstartedtremblingandmyhearttooktumultuousleapsoffear.IthoughtIwasconfident,butIwaswrong.I
13、underestimatedthissurgeryandfromthebeginningtotheend,thingsstartedgettingworseandworse.
Carelessness,overconfidence,impatienceandrashnessfrommeandinsecurityandnervousnessfromAndrearesultedinadevastatingdisaster.Ihadruinedherface,forever.NothingcouldbedonetocorrectthedamageIhadcausedher.EvenwhenDr.W
14、ongtriedtotouchuptheevidenceofmyinexperiencewithhisexpertise,hecouldonlymakeitlookslightlybetter.Justwithonecarelessmoveandherfuturecrumbledinmyguiltyhands.HowcouldIhavedonesuchdamage?Iaskedmyselfeveryminuteafterthefailedoperation.Everynowandthen,tearsofguiltandregretstreameddownmysunkencheeks.Andre
15、adidn'tblameme,assheclaimedthatshewasusedtohavinganunattractivenose,butIknewthatwasn'tthetruth.Deepdown,shewashurt,somuchmorethanme.Herhopesforabetterlifevanishedintothinairwithahorrendouslyscarrednose.Theawkwardstaresshereceivedwhenshewalkeddownthestreetsdampenedherconfidencetilltherewasalmostnonel
16、eft.Iwantedtomakeituptohersobadly,butsherefusedtoblameme.Thatwastheworstpart.
Fromthathorribleexperience,Ihadneverdaredtotouchasurgeryknifeagain.MyworldwasshroudedwithgloomandIwasfeelingsodownanduseless.WhywouldIwanttoriskanotherperson'slifewithmyincompetence?Irejectedallpotentialpatientsandstopped
17、working.Dr.Wongwasdisappointedinmeandcameforwardtoencourageme.Icouldneverforgethiswords.
“Youhavetopickyourselfupfromwhereyoufell.Livinginguiltwouldnotcompensateherforherpaininanyway.Youhavetoproveyourselftome,Andreaandallyourfuturepatientsthatneedyourhelpdesperately.Imagineallthepeoplelongingforas
18、urgeryrightnow.Theywouldbesogladifyoucouldhelpthem,andIknowyouwantto.Comeon,thiswouldn'tbeashardasyouthink.TakeonestepatatimeandIknowthatyoucanachievegreatthings.Justrememberwhatyoudidwrongthelasttimeandneverdoitagain.Havefaithinyourself!”Thinkingthroughhiswords,Iwasdeeplymotivated.Whathesaidwastrue
19、andIwasgoingtoprovetoeveryonethatIcanbecomethegreatplasticsurgeonthatIalwaysdreamtIwas.Iwasgoingtoturnmydreamintoreality.Igottowork.WheneverItriedpickingupmytool,mywholebodyseemedtobeparalyzedwithfear.Itookmonthsofpracticetofinallyovercomeit.Slowlybutsurely,Iwasgainingconfideneeeveryday.Imetsecondpa
20、tientandgotherandmyselfreadyfortheoperation.ThebigdaydrewnearandIwassofearfulofit.However,Dr.Wong'wordsechoedinmyheadoftenandIdrewstrengthfromthere.Thedayfinallyarrivedandthepatientwaswheeledin.Ipickedupmysurgerytools.“Havefaithinyourself,”Dr.Wong'voiceboomedinmyhead.Iperformedtheoperationwithgreatc
21、areandconfideneeanditwasagreatsuccess.Afewlongweeksafterthesurgery,mypatient'facewasunveiled.IwasbreathlesswhenIremovedthelastbandagefromherface.Shewasabeautyandshelookedsodifferentbeforethesurgery.HerhappinessandjoyfromhavinganewfacewaspricelessandIcherishedeverymomentofit.Iknewthatmyjobasaplastics
22、urgeonhadjustbegun.
Begin,itdid.MycareertookoffwithaflyingstartandIwasnowveryaccomplished,veryfamous,verypopularandveryconfident.MemoriesofmypastkeptmerootedtothegroundandItookeverysurgeryseriously,notwantingmypatienttobecomemyvictim.IowedittoDr.WongandAndrea.（1,349words）第二篇獲獎作文—2008年新加坡南華中學作文比賽一等獎
23、中二9班TerenceChuaJie
st1Prize---SecondaryTwoCategoryLeeSayHua（209）詞匯級別|統(tǒng)計※全文共計1,345個英語單詞，其中：
一級詞匯1,071個，占79.62%；二級詞匯102個，占7.58%；三級詞匯34個，占2.52%；★級詞匯62個，占4.60%;無級別詞匯76個，占5.65%；一級、二級、三級詞匯總計：1,207個，占89.73%。
1Prize---SecondaryTwo（★★★）CategoryLeeSayHua（209）bridge,smallimpeccable
Lookingatherhigh,narrown
24、osechinandfulllips,shewaslikean
theskilled(★★)painter(★★)whocreatedherEveryfeaturebestowedformaltogivesomeonesomethingofgreatvalueorimportaneeonherlovelyfacewasstraight,angular,andperfect.ShewasblindinglyveryorextremelygorgeousIfyoudescribesomeoneasgorgeous,youmeanthatyoufindthemverysexuallyattract
25、ive.(INFORMAL),astunning(★)head-turner.Shestaredatherself,speechless,inthemirror.
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?unbelievable!Thankyousomuch
Dr.Lee!
You
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”she
stamme
26、red,
beforebursting(★★)intorocking
(★)sobs.
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goodevenwhenshe
cries
thoughtwitha
chuckle.
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her
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wavesofpride
andsatisfactionreared
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me.Shelooked
sodifferentfrom
27、when
she
firstcame
to
me.Herfractured
nose
and
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28、ddler（★）whojustspokeherfirstwords.
“Youaresotalented（★）andpromising（★）I'mquitesuretheymeantitwhentheysaidthatyouhavetheMidas/、ma?i?s/touch!theMidastouchifsomeonehastheMidastouch,theysucceedeasilyateverythingtheydo”shegushed滔滔不絕地講話withdelight（★★）.Iwasnostranger（★★）tothesecommentsbutIstilllappedthema
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expect
tohearifyouwereanaccomplishedpeople?Tonnes（★★）ofpraise（★★）skilfulplasticsurgeon
★★）whohasdone
hundreds
★★）ofsuccessful
surgeriesfor
Iwasquiteusedtothisnewenvironmentwherenothingr
30、eallyscares（★）meanymoreAngelinaJolie,JessicaAlbaandevenBradPiffwannabes模仿者,崇拜者flock（★）tomeforhelp.Aftermonthsandmonthsofexcruciating/?k?skru?i?e?t??/extremelypainfulpainforthepatientandhardworkformyteamandI,theendresultwouldalwaysberewarding（★★）.Thepatientwouldhavehisorherdesired（★★）faceandIwouldhav
31、eyetanothersuccessfulrecordundermybelt.
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.Iwasn'
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wanted
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Iget
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Ifu
33、rthered
studies
and
workedhardtobecomeaplasticsurgeon（★★）.
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man,
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forbeing
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34、
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Dr.Wongannounced
thatIwasgoodenoughto
handl
35、ethingsonmy
own.Myfirstpatient
,Andrea,wasapetite/p??ti?t/
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youngladywhofelt
inferior（★）becauseofa
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theprocedures
ofthesurgery.Ifeltvery
confident
ofthisandthought
thatnothing
couldposs
36、iblygowrong
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minor
nosejobtome.Iwasburningwithanticipation（★）butIdidn'trealizethatwhatfeltsominortomewasawholedifferentthingforAndrea.Notonlywouldshehaveanewnose,shewouldgainawholenewlife.Itwouldaffectthewaypeoplethoughtofheranditwouldchangeherfutureanddesires（★★★）.Ididn'tstepintoAndrea
37、'sshoesandthatwasahugemistake.ThemomentIpickedupmysurgerytools,myhandsstartedtrembling（★★）andmyhearttooktumultuousdisorderlyorconfused;violentleaps（★）offear.IthoughtIwasconfident,butIwaswrong.Iunderestimated（★）thissurgeryandfromthebeginningtotheend,thingsstartedgettingworseandand
worse.
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38、ss,overconfidence,impatiencerashness
frommeandinsecurity
and
nervousness
fromAndrearesulted
ina
devastating
★）disaster.Ihadruined
herface
correctthe
Dr.Wong
forever.NothingcouldbedonetodamageIhadcausedher.Evenwhen
triedtotouchupimprovesthbymakingsmallchanges稍作修改以改進某事物：rmgoingtotouchu
39、pthosescratcheswithabitofpaint.我要用點兒顏料修補那些劃痕.
theevidenceofmyinexperiencewithhisexpertise,hecouldonlymakeitlookslightlybetter.Justwithonecareless(★)moveandherfuturecrumbledinmyguiltyhands.HowcouldIhavedonesuchdamage?Iaskedmyselfeveryminuteafterthefailedoperation.Everynowandthen,tearsofguiltregret(★
40、)streamed(★)downmysunkencheeksAndreadidn'tblameme,assheclaimedthatshewasusedtohavinganunattractivenose,butIknewthatwasn'tthetruth.Deepdownshewashurt,somuchmorethanme.Herhopesforabetterlifevanished(★★)intothinairwithahorrendously駭人聽聞地scarred(★)nose.
Theawkwardstaresshereceivedwhenshewalkeddownthestr
41、eetsdampened使沮喪herconfidencetilltherewasalmostnoneleft.Iwantedtomakeituptohersobadly,butsherefusedtoblameme.ThatwastheworstpartFromthathorribleexperience,Ihadnever
daredtotouchasurgeryknifeagain.Myworldwasshroudedtocoverorhidesomethingwithgloom（★）andIwasfeelingsodownanduseless（★★）.WhywouldIwanttori
42、skanotherperson'slifewithmyincompetence?Irejectedallpotentialpatientsandstoppedworking.Dr.Wongwasdisappointedinmeandcameforwardtoencourageme.Icouldneverforgethiswords
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fell.Livinginguilt（★★）wouldnot★★）
herforher
paininanyway
.Youhaveto
prove
yourse
43、lf
tome,Andrea
andallyour
future
patients
that
need
yourhelp
desperately
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all
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longing（★）forasurgeryrightnow
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atimeandI
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44、ngs
.Just
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andneverdoitagain
.Havefaith
inyourself
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wasdeeply
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that
Ican
becomethegreat
plasticsurgeon
（★★）
thatI
always
dreamt
Iwas.Iwasgoingtoturnmy
dream
intoreality
.Igottowork
.Wh
45、eneverI
tried
picking
upmytool,my
whole
body
seemed
tobe
paralyzedwith
fear.I
took
months
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overcome
it
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（★★★）butsurely,I
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andmyselfready（★★★）forthe
.ThebigdaydrewnearandIwasso
fearful
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46、it.
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words
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inmyheadoftenand
Idrew
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wheeledin.
Ipickedupmy
surgerytools
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yourself,”Dr.
Wong'svoiceboomed
inmyhead
.Iperformed
theoperationwithgreat
careandconfidence
anditwasagrea
47、tsuccess
.Afewlongweeks
afterthesurgery,
my
patient'sfacewas
unveiled.
Iwasbreathless
whenIremovedthe
lastbandage（★）fromherface.Shewasa
andshelookedsodifferentbeforetheHerhappiness（★★）andjoyfromanewfacewaspricelessandI
beautysurgery
havingcherishedeverymomentofitjobasaplasticsurgeon（Begin,itdid.MycareerstartandIwasnowveryveryfamous,verypopularMemoriesofmypastkeptmegroundandItookeverywantingmypatienttoowedittoDr.Wongand.Iknewthatmy
★★）hadjustbegun.
tookoffwithaflyingaccomplished（★）,
andveryconfident.rooted（★）tothesurgeryseriously,notbecomemyvictim.IAndrea.
2016104培養(yǎng)聽說讀寫技能的先決條件是說寫解讀
