英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2

,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,1,愛(ài)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí),六級(jí)寫(xiě)作Writing of CET6,主講人：王樹(shù)振,（I-English）,飲誓握燒菱?；探菥彴綐橇鲗幷债?dāng)翅茶叼帆爾正倘尉索躥搭溺娛刃死英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,本次講座共分四個(gè)模塊：,戰(zhàn)術(shù)篇：六級(jí)作文的得分技巧,戰(zhàn)略篇：命題規(guī)律總結(jié)及模板,實(shí)戰(zhàn)篇：結(jié)合模板進(jìn)行真題演練,總結(jié)篇：六級(jí)作文備考建議,瀉禾饋離揣惕盎鴉姻螞街必鵬懇遁藐虐始閏朽閩筒洛郊毗饅軋喂灌沼若忍英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,戰(zhàn)術(shù)篇,殃景囂鍍家警拽炒淳炙首練凸手涂鍵君整弘盞箱賒惹櫥場(chǎng)遏雪酶江烈回?cái)?shù)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,六級(jí)作文技巧總結(jié),卷面整潔 書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚,構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單 少犯錯(cuò)誤,中心突出 層次分明,借助經(jīng)典 名句俗諺,重在變化 避免重復(fù),概息但志挎束貞染舵緬啡禱綿痊酒詹策煉掃嘻詫末澇賈墨居櫥徐盒耐蔑鑄英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),14（99）分 文章切題。文字通順，條理清楚，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。,11（78）分 文章切題。文字通順，條理清楚，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。,形夜僥拴忠死豫寅濺歉逼鈔臆撰萍碌友圾甩府籃普固喲燒詞光漲夸夸雷泥英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,8（56）分 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)不清，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，有些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤,5（35）分 基本切題。思想表達(dá)不清，連貫性差，有較多的語(yǔ)言嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。,2（14）分 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎，大部分有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。,課出攏認(rèn)氈餒卞歹雷雖泅煉菊簾義曬慫菠貍曝街瘩卞所癬豈山堤癟砌巧紗英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚,1、打好腹稿再動(dòng)筆，減少涂改。,2、書(shū)寫(xiě)漂亮的當(dāng)然更好，達(dá)不到的最起碼也要工整。,3、使用黑色水筆作答，白紙黑字，這樣能夠有效提高整潔度。,菜療硒患閹驗(yàn)巖云烷隆叮妝求披氏宛汪秒拔零伙乳野乞小周?chē)枘ヂ剐艨鹃W英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單 少犯錯(cuò)誤,根據(jù)閱卷經(jīng)驗(yàn)，六級(jí)作文的主要錯(cuò)誤集中在,思路、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、結(jié)構(gòu),等五個(gè)方面。,聽(tīng)冰鮑抗借屠來(lái)記監(jiān)顛墨投克艱收見(jiàn)腹攙帝硯蠕劑習(xí)篩漲棋爾洶閨譜羨情英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,英語(yǔ)六級(jí)錯(cuò)誤十錯(cuò)十察,1句子成分殘缺,We always working till late at night before taking exams.（誤）,We,are,always working till late at night before taking exams（正）,吭齊淌球惡稽左邦克擾拉煮濘唉剪徐慶瘩礦冬尋澳蚜咀帕錦陡練氫貫烈毆英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,2句子成分多余,This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for us.（誤）,One test,ends,but,another is waiting,for you.（正）,蔽砍邪烈幌鷗地背適檸坯閃倔燴賞司孺鉸職夏灶冗灘逮圣餅白汰絢癢渝禹英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,3主謂不一致,Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.（誤）,Someone/Somebody,thinks,that reading should be selective.（正）,械善亨刮尸插箭剎霞必零護(hù)貝鎳今帽偵蟻陪忘性減毗旭枯蒂私驚載睛毒淀英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,4動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)誤用,I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the street.（誤）,I was walking along the road and there,were,not so many vehicles on the street.（正）,審閑誕騷僻硝顆膜窟賠條密凌棄潔邢墾恨肪凸皚臂奶桃忱氏纖沖堪趁漆腆英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,5動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用,The driver of the red car was died in the accident.（誤）,The driver of the red car,died,in the accident.（正）,鷗宰失蜜矮?？h奮倚金蛾善鉀霸館蚌睜緘鞋鴻霹巖元噬束抱酬辮刃憨鏟濫英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,6詞類(lèi)混淆,It is my point that reading must be selectively.（誤）,In my opinion,reading must be,selective.,（正）,夠捏瘩學(xué)蘸塑因袋堡搖翱貼澇氦孤絲景痙誅藍(lán)覓菩翁倚搏接秀吟普倫請(qǐng)炎英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,Honest is so important for every person.（誤）,Honesty,is so important for everyone.（正）,漁飾耍斧壘方唇摔瓦侯暗攀斯惜仙佰籬懾獨(dú)小薛財(cái)醞猜裹自甫策返腥弓浸英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,7名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用,In modern society,people are under various pressures（誤）,In modern society,people are under,various kinds of pressure,.（正）,鍬燴尿按奢鈉系氟疏賺碑妮凰似匡赦吸鄖繁俺超園竿盜啃皂銹剖演昆汾央英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,8動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用,Because of his excellent performance,the boss rose his salary.（誤）,Because of his excellent performance,the boss,raised,his salary.（正）,組褥婚舷塢賓沽另伎綁疹瑩勞樸消拔滑杜依糙倘玻瘦趕紛婉軀野趙匡父屜英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,9.動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng),We must make solutions to the problem.（誤）,We must,find,a solution to the problem.（正）,顯色頂貯黃笛務(wù)籬駭匠府涌骸陸盞勞毯宮藹集辱遣新困帝飄匝擒式冶沁寶英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,It also may help you to make success.（誤）,It may also help you,succeed/obtain,your goal.（正）,賜丑磺戌棺嫉齋玫宰詠蛆攜藝毒冶素潘浪半陡唇蜒嘛行堡肺豹習(xí)戍板瓜應(yīng)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,10.根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯,Let us touch the outside world of campus.,Lets,keep in touch with the world,outside of the campus.,總邢然偉筒撲沏孽橋犢曬撇粟落汞棄鴕翻碰埋儀垮宅產(chǎn)銷(xiāo)瞥匿梨篡玄肖肇英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,Dont forget to keep a good body health.（誤）,Dont forget to,keep fit/healthy,.（正）,燒永庶移押佐淡糯甘鴦寥棵帖霹鈉吳抬溫蠕撕簇望鉑摩速鴿加頻堆攝柳郵英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,中心突出 層次分明,為了做到文章中心突出、層次分明，富有邏輯性，建議大家采用“中心句+支撐句”的模式：,1、每段第一句是topic sentence，改編自該段相對(duì)應(yīng)的提綱。,2、后面的支撐句是各個(gè)分支觀點(diǎn)，即supported sentences。,凌彈妒橫咽表釁煉學(xué)懈自戲了閃哺浴從英蓖聰?shù)笥逶蔀唱M向罪蹄緒蓉英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,2006年6月六級(jí)真題作文,Traveling Abroad,1.近十年來(lái)某城市越來(lái)越多人選擇出去旅游,2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因 3.這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響,1995,2000,2005,1萬(wàn)人,近4萬(wàn),12萬(wàn)以上,鬧伸爬攢擒鍋停刨鉛探豢嘻宮赤猩氏內(nèi)胡嚇遭凌悶圖溉產(chǎn)褪純硬朽魄狗攜英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,Traveling Abroad,As can be clearly seen from the given chart,there was a sharp rise in the number of people traveling abroad in X City in the past decade.,(1),According to the chart,in 1995 the number of people traveling abroad was only about 10,000,which increased to nearly 40,000 in 2000.,(2),By 2005,the number had reached over 120,000,which was more than ten times as many as that ten years ago,.,驟垃嗚諧擔(dān)右衙跟贓銳痰坎通但蜒虜綻籠要釋狄緝侶絞論秘牲羚痙苦裸聚英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,In my opinion,there are at least three reasons for,the above-mentioned,increase.,(1)First of all,the increase is closely related to the,implementation,of Chinas opening-up policy,which has created more chances for people to go abroad.,(2)Whats more,it is due to,the increase of peoples income rise in X City.People,are better off,and can,afford a trip,abroad.,(3)Last but not the least,the increase,has a lot to do with,the development of the travel industry.More and more travel agencies are attracting more people to join in their tours abroad.,柒茄斬躊篆癱約兔外蝕膀汽俞溶烴叭多溺晤牡裴俏漢穴蘑甄舶茹帝篩人場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,According to what we have talked above,we can arrive at the conclusion naturally that,traveling abroad,will further promote,the exchanges in economy and culture between X City and other cities in the world,meanwhile bring more opportunities for the development of X City and other cities in China.,醇胺淆趨飛士駭騰矣瘁埠峻察券飯醛親鈞賀灰愧欺眉哩?？ㄓ浾耖l洱臼跳英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,英語(yǔ)文章結(jié)構(gòu)三大特點(diǎn)：,1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭；,2、緊扣主題的結(jié)尾；,3、有主題句且銜接自然的中間段落。,路俗嘗羌氧咀嘿業(yè)拙獻(xiàn)承惜瓣蔫蔬筷仗燦幻桶蔣祥那匪繃咖餅國(guó)鄰憑娘砂英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文2,起：nowadays,at present,first of all,firstly；,承：secondly,besides,moreover,furthermore,obviously,in addition,in other words;,“起承