人教版初中英語八年級上冊Unit 1Section B Writing共26張PPT)

How to Better a Piece of Writing （Go for it ！八年級上冊 unit1）Teaching topic(教學(xué)主題) Preparation Preparation Who ？ Learn and know the information of Writing elements(寫作要素) How （weather）; When; Where; Who; What; How （feel）Before writing How （weather） （sunny） When （ July 2 5 th ） Where （Haitang Park） Who （friends and Mr Li） What （boating；eating some Rongchang bean jelly(涼粉)； going bikeriding ） How （happy）The information of Writing elements(寫作要素)about Mr Li Help怎么幫助李老師寫出更好的旅行日記 In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. We came back to the hotel late in the evening. ConstructionIs this passage good ？ Better the layout (布局)Preparation Body: What(activities)Beginning: When, How(Weather),Where, Who Ending: How(Feelings)Construction In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. We came back to the hotel late in the evening. I went to Rongchang Haitang Park on vacation last summer. lt was July 25th, it was a sunny day. I went to the Haitang Lake with my friends. We all felt tired but happy.Construction Better the sentences （句子）Preparation How can we better the logic ?Linking words (連接詞) Mr Li took a lot of photos.Mr Li took a lot of photos, _they were very beautiful.and, so, but,thenand Mr Li tried boating, and Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓).Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓), _it was boring.and, so, but,thenbut Mr Li ate some Rongchang bean jelly(涼粉), but Mr Li went bike riding.It was sunny, _ Mr Li went bike riding.and, so, but,then so Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓), but it was boring.Rongchang bean jelly(涼粉), we walked along the lake , then took a lot of photos.Linking words (連接詞) 用 and、but、so 、then等 連接詞填空 I went to Rongchang Haitang Park on vacation last summer. lt was July 2 5 th, it was a sunny day. I went to the Haitang Lake with my friends. In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏樓), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. It was sunny, we went bike riding.We came back to the hotel late in the evening. We all felt tired but happy.and soandbutbutthenand 榮昌初級中學(xué)英語社團(tuán)擬舉辦一次“Follow Me to the Interesting Places in Rongchang”的英文征文活動，你可以選擇下列任務(wù)之一，以游記的形式給社團(tuán)投稿，介紹自己曾經(jīng)去過的榮昌的某個有趣的地方(如萬靈古鎮(zhèn)；螺罐山；安富陶瓷博物館；海棠公園等等)。字?jǐn)?shù)80-120字。1， 自由寫:根據(jù)游記要素和語篇結(jié)構(gòu)寫出自己的旅行日記。2 ，仿寫:回讀Mr Li的游記，根據(jù)你的具體情況替換其中細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，仿寫一篇游記。writing travel diary Show TimeBe brave!Production What you have learned today?summary 1、Better the sentences （句子）2、Better the logic (邏輯) 3、Better the layout (布局)How to makebetter 小組以每位同學(xué)的旅行日志為材料，配圖出一份手抄報，在校園里進(jìn)行展示。 Thank you !