中考英語必備復習 書面表達課件

書面表達書面表達 書面表達”是考查學生綜合運用英語能力的一種題型，它要求考生根據(jù)所給情景和要求寫一篇短文，文章內(nèi)容要符合所給的情景和要求。文理句子要通順，它既像作文又不完全是作文，因為書面表達有提示和要求兩部分?！疤崾尽币话惆ㄅc寫作內(nèi)容緊密相關的信息；“要求”一般包括對短文的文體、格式及字數(shù)的要求。我們不能離開情景和要求自行立意、選材，隨意發(fā)揮。它類似漢譯英，但又不同于漢譯英，因為我們必須根據(jù)所給材料進行適當?shù)匕l(fā)揮，切中題意，語言準確，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。為此我們要做到以下幾點，按要求完成題目，取得良好的成績。 一、審題要仔細 仔細閱讀“書面表達”的提示及要求，有給文字背景材料的，有看圖作文的，還有兩者兼而有之的。對于文字材料，我們要仔細閱讀其內(nèi)容，并對材料中所給的信息進行篩選，抓住重點，進行立意，否則，會導致書面表達的錯誤率升高，甚至邏輯不清，文不對題。對于看圖作文，我們把幾幅畫面聯(lián)系起來，若是漫畫式的，一般主題鮮明，圖畫中多余的內(nèi)容很少，讀起來比較容易理解。若是寫實式的，圖畫中與主題無關的內(nèi)容較多，有時容易被細小問題所糾纏而不能明確主題，所以要仔細審題，領會作者究竟想表達一個什么樣的中心思想，然后再分別去描述。 二、行文要正確 讀完提示與要求之后，就要對提供的信息或畫面進行語言上的組織，要用英語進行思維，有的學生習慣用漢語打底稿，再逐句翻譯，這樣一方面浪費時間，另一方面容易寫成漢語式的英語。要學會用英語思維，直接用英語表達，使文章意思連貫，語言流暢，邏輯嚴謹。 三、語言要嚴謹 盡量使用自己熟悉的已經(jīng)掌握的詞匯和句型，長短句子要結合，盡量使用簡單句，正確選擇人稱和時態(tài)。若一時想不起某個單詞的拼寫，可“ 繞道而行”， 由同義詞或近義詞來代替， 也可使用同義句或者正話反說。如“他英語學得很好” ，可以說HE STUDIES ENGLISH VERY WELL./ HE IS GOOD AT ENGLISH./ HE DOES WELL IN ENGLISH. 或者HIS ENGLISH ISNT POOR. 這是關鍵的一步，只有把握好這一關，才能有效地減少錯誤的發(fā)生。 四、適當發(fā)揮 適當發(fā)揮但不能脫離中心， 還要符合字數(shù)要求，切忌多多益善。古人云“言多易失”，你寫得越多，出錯的幾率就越大，所以不可畫蛇添足，為了語言的連貫性，適當使用過渡詞，如AND、THEN、SO、OR、BUT等，可使文章錦上添花。 五、書寫要規(guī)范 卷面要清楚，書寫要規(guī)范。卷面就像是人的臉面，干干凈凈，一塵不染最好。首先你就能得到一些感情分，即便有些錯誤，閱卷者也不愿意忍痛割愛。相反，字跡潦草，涂涂改改，肯定要被扣分，另外書寫時要壓格，這樣會使字跡看起來更清楚、更漂亮。 六、成文多查看 文章寫完后， 一定要回過頭來認真檢查，檢查時注意以下要點文章是否符合題意要求，要點有無遺漏語言是否流暢，語法是否正確，包括單詞拼寫、大小寫，標點符號；動詞時態(tài)，語態(tài)，名詞單復數(shù)，所有格，主謂一致，詞語搭配等?？傊?，英語書面表達能力的提高是一個從量變到質變的過程，需要我們平時在學習中多注意，多積累，從根本上解決存在的問題，這樣才有“一份耕耘，一份收獲”，也才能讓自己“下筆如有神”。 【訓練一】（2014龍巖）英語課上，老師向同學們介紹了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事跡，你深受感動。請你用英語寫一則日記，寫出自己的感受。內(nèi)容要點及要求：1. 表明自己將向“孝心少年”學習；2. 你將在日常生活、學習中做些什么來孝敬父母；3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞提示詞（可選用）：LEARN FROM, RESPECT, CARE FOR, DO SOME HOUSEWORK, STUDY HARDMONDAY, JUNE 30 SUNNYTHIS MORNING, OUR ENGLISH TEACHER TOLD US SOME STORIES ABOUT “THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FILIAL PIETY YOUTH IN 2013 ”. _Monday, June 30 Sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents. I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them. (88 words) 【訓練二】（2014.鹽城）親愛的同學， 初中三年的英語學習中， 牛津初中英語教材給我們提供了大量寓教于樂、生動活潑的閱讀素材，伴隨我們成長。請以“ENGLISH TEXTBOOKS ARE GOOD FRIENDS”為題寫一篇短文參加學校的英語作文競賽。reasons for reading English textbooksto learn English to open our mindsto make our life more colorfulthings youve learned in English textbooksWonderful things in the world Cultures around the worldyour favourite famous person or place in English textbooks, and the reasons注意事項：1. 90詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入 總詞數(shù)）；表達清楚，語法正確，上下 文連貫； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必須包括表格中所提供的注要信息，并作適 當發(fā)揮。English Textbooks are Good FriendsEnglish textbooks play an important part in our study of English. _ English Textbooks are Good Friends English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They are good materials for us to learn English well. They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colorful. Weve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks, which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person. Some famous people weve learned affect us a lot. My favorite one is Audrey Hepburn, a great American successful actress, who devoted much of her time and money to charity. Ive learned a lot from her. 【訓練三】（2014漳州）足夠的睡眠時間對學生來講很重要，然而調查顯示，許多學生睡眠不足。請根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，簡要指出學生睡眠不足的原因并提出建議。要求：1要點齊全，并適當發(fā)揮：2詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。 ITS IMPORTANT FOR STUDENTS TO HAVE ENOUGH SLEEPING TIMEHOWEVER,_ Its important for students to have enough sleeping time. However ,many of them don t have enough time to sleep There are different reasons for itSome students often spend too much time on computer games so that they dont go to bed earlySome students have bad sleeping habitsThey often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bedThis makes them too excited to fall asleep .In order to get enough sleep ,we should keep away from computer gamesWe shouldnt stay up too late . Whats more ,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed ,which can help us have a sound sleepIn a word, if we make good use of time and form good habits, well have enough sleeping time . Then well be happier and healthier. 【訓練四】（2014.黔西南州）黔西南州）有一種節(jié)約叫光盤，有一種公益叫光盤！所謂光盤，就是吃光你盤子中的食物，拒絕浪費，珍惜糧食！針對這項行動，并根據(jù)以下提示，請你以“NO WASTING ON FOOD”為題寫一篇短文，號召大家參與這項活動。要點提示：要點提示：REASON1. A WASTE OF FOOD, MONEY 2. POLLUTE THE ENVIRONMENT SUGGESTION:1. EAT UP ALL YOUR FOOD/CLEAR YOUR PLATE2. LEFTOVERS(剩飯菜)3. ORDER LESS OR SMALLER DISHES 注意注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮； 2. 語句流暢，書寫規(guī)范； 3. 詞數(shù)80-100詞； 4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名等信息； 5. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 No Wasting On Food Recently, many restaurants around our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign(活動) against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. _ No Wasting On FoodRecently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And its not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China, they dont have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign. What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food . 【訓練五】（2014.呼和浩特）呼和浩特）良好的生活與學習習慣對我們的成長是非常重要的。請從以下的習慣中選擇一個你以前做得不夠好，但現(xiàn)在已具備的好習慣，談一談你養(yǎng)成這個習慣的過程及收益。 要求：1）不使用真實的校名、人名等相關信息； 2）內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊； 3）80詞左右； 4）文章的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。 MY GOOD HABIT_ IS MY GOOD HABIT._My good habit is early to bed to rise. Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 oclock. The next day I couldnt get up on time. I used to be late for school, and I felt tired in class. It was too bad. With the help of my teacher and my parents, I gave up the bad habit. Ever since then, I go to bed early and get up early, I never go to school late again. As a result, Im much stronger and doing better in school now. 【訓練六】（2014.鄂州）不久前，全國有部分省市出臺一項新政策：高考英語將由150分降為100分，此事在國內(nèi)引起極大爭議。有的人認為此舉很好，有的人則認為不妥。作為一名中學生，你的看法是什么？請分析其原因。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及 其他相關信息，否則不予評分。 3. 參考詞匯：REFORM改革；MASTER掌握； ADVANCED先進的 NOT LONG BEFORE, A NEW POLICY AROUSED A HEATED DISCUSSION THAT THE MARK OF ENGLISH WILL BE REDUCED FROM 150 TO 100. Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100. As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We should master it to better know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. Whats more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English. In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should learn it well. 【訓練七】（2014.菏澤）假如你是王昆，你的美國網(wǎng)友TOM對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“春節(jié)”非常感興趣，請你以“MY FAVORITE FESTIVAL”為題，寫一封E-MAIL.，給他做一介紹。1要點包括：節(jié)日簡介、節(jié)日準備、節(jié)日活動等；2字數(shù)要求：100字左右。3提示：THE SPRING FESTIVAL, TRADITIONAL, GET TOGETHER, CLEAN UP, BE DRESSED INSubject: My Favorite Festival From: Wang KunDear Tom,Wang KunThe Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people. Several days before the New Year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.On the eve of the New Year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve oclock. On the first day of the New Year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay New Year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time. 【訓練八】（2014溫州）假如你是林思，要去澳大利亞的MELBOURNE HIGH留學，需要在當?shù)卣乙粋€寄宿家庭（HOST FAMILY).請按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理MR. PORTER.內(nèi)容包括：（1）簡單介紹自己的個人情況，如語言，愛 好等 （2）提出自己的對寄宿家庭的要求（如下表所示）Family member English speaker ,no smokerHousingNear the school, a bedroom with a bathroomOthersCooking by myself注意：郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞匯）；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關信息。Dear Mr Porter, My name is Li Si, _ Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes, Lin Si Dear Mr. Porter, My name is Lin Si. Im a sixteen-year-old boy from China. Im going to study in Melbourne High. I like making friends. English is my favorite subject but Im weak in spoken English. Thats why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope its a family without smokers. Moreover, its better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom. As for the meals, Id like to cook by myself because Im fond of cooking. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes, Lin Si 【訓練九】(2014.內(nèi)江市內(nèi)江市)以下是NICK VUJICIC的基本信息，請根據(jù)這些信息和要求，寫一篇英語短文，向某英語報社投稿。項目 信息及要求生日1982年12月4日出生地 澳大利亞主要事跡 1.一生下來就沒有雙臂和雙腿，但他學會 了游泳、穿衣服、使用電腦等。 2. 2l歲大學畢業(yè)后周游世界做演講，與年 輕人談人生和夢想，至今有三百多萬 人聽過他的演講。3.到過中國5次，2008年來成都幫助地震 中的幸存者( survivors)。你從他的故事中學到了什么？ 寫一點即可。注意：所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；詞數(shù)：100個詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、姓名等其它信息，否則，不予評分。 Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world . _ Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker. His experienceinspires a lot of people in the world. He was born on December 4th, 1982 in Australia. Unluckily, he was born without arms or legs, but he learnt to swim, get dressed, used a computer and so on. At 21, Nick graduated from university. Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams. He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far. He has ever visited China five times. In 2008, he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake. From his story , I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life . 【訓練十】(2014連云港連云港)某英語報開展“HOW TO DEAL WITH THE EXAM STRESS”征文比賽，請你根據(jù)圖片和表格中提示的內(nèi)容，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。適當?shù)膲毫Ψe極思考，認真學習及時復習，防止遺忘過重的壓力無法入睡，非常疲倦害怕考試，導致失敗應對的措施合理計劃，準備充分 (至少2條)注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù) （2）文中不得提及考生所在學校及自己的姓名 HOW TO DEAL WITH THE EXAM STRESSEVERYONE MAY HAVE THE EXAM STRESS. A LITTLE BIT OF STRESS CAN BE A GOOD THING TO US.