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1、第十四節(jié)建議信 1結(jié)構(gòu)分析 首段：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。 主體段落：通常首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。 尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。 2時(shí)態(tài)的使用：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，同時(shí)兼顧其他時(shí)態(tài)。 佳句遞送 好開(kāi)頭 1Im glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well. 很高興收到你的來(lái)信，詢問(wèn)我如何很好地欣賞藝術(shù)。 2I am glad to know that you are going to enter
2、 college and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions of choosing your major. 我很高興得知你將進(jìn)入大學(xué)并且很榮幸能就專(zhuān)業(yè)選擇方面給你提一些建議。 3Concerning your request，I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit. 對(duì)于你的請(qǐng)求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建議。 好結(jié)尾 1In my opinion，you would be wise to accept his advice. 依我之見(jiàn)，采納他的建議是您的明智
3、之舉。 2I do hope you will consider my suggestion. 真心希望你能考慮我的建議。 3I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. 我希望這些建議對(duì)你有所幫助，并且樂(lè)于和你就此事進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的交流。 好句子 1In the first place，I would also recommend a balanced diet. 首先，我會(huì)推薦均衡飲食。 2Why not d
4、rink a little，exercise，stop smoking and eat more fruit and vegetables? 為何不少喝點(diǎn)酒，參加鍛煉，不抽煙，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？ 3I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning your fatness. 我覺(jué)得就你的肥胖問(wèn)題表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)可能會(huì)很有用。 4閑暇之余，你可以有很多地方休閑娛樂(lè)。 In your spare time，you can enjoy yourself in many places. There are many plac
5、es for entertainment where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time. Many places for entertainment will offer you a chance to enjoy yourself in your spare time. 佳作賞析 題目要求 你(王偉)的好友(李磊)最近經(jīng)常和一些朋友去網(wǎng)吧、游戲廳玩，有時(shí)甚至?xí)缯n。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)給他寫(xiě)一封建議信。 1朋友在人的一生中起著重要作用； 2真正的朋友不會(huì)讓你去做壞事； 3所以我們要明辨是非，慎重交友?，F(xiàn)場(chǎng)閱卷 精彩變式 用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ)進(jìn)
6、行改寫(xiě) 用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)句中加黑部分 強(qiáng)調(diào)句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞hope 升級(jí)五檔作文 Dear Li Lei， I am writing to you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you. I have noticed that recently you often go to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several friends.Sometimes，you even didnt have classes in or
7、der to play with your friends.Being one of your best friends，Im very worried about you.Friends play an important part in ones life.It is our friends that we have to choose carefully.Real friends will never ask us to do something wrong.I dont think the friends around you are your real friends. Its hi
8、gh time that you should think about the problem I have mentioned above.And I do hope you will make a wise decision soon. Yours， Wang Wei 演練提升 假設(shè)你是李華。近日，你的筆友Jack聽(tīng)說(shuō)你們學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展“建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)(Construction of an energysaving society)”的主題活動(dòng)，發(fā)來(lái)郵件請(qǐng)你介紹一下你對(duì)該活動(dòng)的看法和建議。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給Jack回一封電子郵件。 1不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張； 2盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋；
9、3畢業(yè)生將書(shū)贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用； 4其他建議。 注意：1.詞數(shù)：120150； 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：方便筷disposable chopsticks 【參考范文】 Dear Jack. Glad to receive your email. As you know，there has been an activity of“Construction of an energysaving society”in our school recently.I think it is of vital importance because our society is fac
10、ing the increasing danger of lack of energy. Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity. In my opinion，therere many things we can do.In our daily life，we shouldnt waste any food or paper.It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides，I think the g
11、overnment should make it a rule that those used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school，because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled. Actually，there are quite a lot that we can easily do：for example，try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars，etc.All of these will definitely help to construct an energysaving society. Yours， Li Hua
高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí) 第三部分 寫(xiě)作提升系列 第二板塊 第14節(jié) 建議信課件 北師大版
