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1、第四節(jié)定語從句的寫作 技法指導 一、寫作中常用的幾種定語從句 1關系代詞引導的定語從句 關系代詞who，whom，whose，that，which，as引導的定語從句是寫作的一大重點，尤其是which和as引導的非限制性定語從句在高考范文中更是屢見不鮮。 In my opinion，those who have received her donation will be encouraged to study even harder and try their best to achieve success.(2014廣東高考滿分作文) But the best gift I have rec

2、eived is a watch，which my dad gave me on my last birthday.(2014重慶高考滿分作文) 但我收到的最好的禮物是一塊表，是上次生日我爸爸給我的。 2關系副詞引導的定語從句 關系副詞引導的定語從句是指when，where，why引導的定語從句。 The reason why people celebrate the festival is that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year，and p

3、eople will gather together eating moon cakes and appreciating the full moon.(2013遼寧高考滿分作文) 人們慶祝這個節(jié)日的原因是，他們相信這時候是一年中月亮最滿、最亮的時候，人們聚在一起吃月餅、賞滿月。 3“介詞which/whom”引導的定語從句 Our class is made up of 52 students，all of whom are friendly and hardworking.(2014天津高考書面表達) 我們班由52個學生組成，所有人都很友好，很勤奮。 學以致用 用適當?shù)年P系詞填空 1Tho

4、se who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.(2013廣東高考滿分作文) 2Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.(2014遼寧高考滿分作文) 3My teacher advised me to repeat the materials several times

5、 and read them aloud，which they think will help improve my memory.(2013四川高考書面表達) 4I will never forget the days when we worked in the small town. 5She was educated at Beijing University，after which she went to have her advanced study abroad. 二、定語從句的寫法 定語從句是比較難掌握而又是學生在寫作中喜歡嘗試的復雜句，因此在寫作時可采用“三步法”： 第一步：寫

6、出兩個簡單句。 第二步：在一個簡單句中找出一個要修飾的詞匯，這個詞在兩個簡單句中都有。 第三步：把另一個簡單句改成定語從句，要特別注意引導詞的選擇。 【示例】 第一步：寫出兩個簡單句。 The foreigner is from Canada. He visited our class yesterday. 第二步：在句中找出一個要修飾的詞匯：the foreigner。 第三步：用句充當定語從句，the foreigner為先行詞指人，句中的代詞he指代the foreigner且在句子中作主語，故用who或that作引導詞。 The foreigner who/that visited o

7、ur class yesterday is from Canada. 學以致用 把下列每組題中的兩個簡單句合并為一個含有定語從句的復合句 1Ive always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then. Ive_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent. 2I have a friend. Her father is an engineer. I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.

8、 3They planted the trees. The trees didnt need much water. They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didnt_need_much_water. 4This is the best method. It can be used against pollution. This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution. 5They sent the elderly some fruits，cleaned the rooms and had a g

9、ood chat with them. The elderly always feel lonely. They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely，cleaned_the_rooms_and_had_a_good_chat_with_them. 三、定語從句寫作的幾點注意事項 1誤用關系詞 誤：I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China. 正：I live in Beijing，which is the capital of China. 誤：I have a fri

10、end，whos name is Liu Mei. 正：I have a friend，whose name is Liu Mei. 2句子殘缺 誤：There were many students took part in the English competition. 正：There were many students who took part in the English competition. 誤：Those who in favor of the proposal，please raise your hands. 正：Those who are in favor of the

11、 proposal，please raise your hands. 3有多余詞 誤：The film I saw it last night was really very good. 正：The film I saw last night was really very good. 誤：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. 正：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood. 4定語從句與并列

12、句的混淆 誤：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，it does great harm to peoples health. 正：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，which/and it does great harm to peoples health. 誤：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，it didnt help. 正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，wh

13、ich/but it didnt help. 學以致用 單句改錯 1Those have work experience can find a job easily._ 答案Those后加who 2Some songs remind us of the people which we love._ 答案which who(m) 3This is the factory we visited it last year._ 答案去掉it 4She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area._

14、答案where which/that 5As a child，Jack studied in a village school，it is named after his grandfather._ 答案it which或在it前加and 演練提升 .完成句子 1曾經(jīng)，我在學習英語中，尤其在詞匯和語法方面面對著一個難題，依我看，它不可能被克服。 Once，I was faced with great difficulty in learning English，especially in vocabulary and grammar，which，from my point of view，is

15、_unlikely_to_overcome(2014山東高考滿分作文) 2當今，父母為他們的獨生子女做所有的事情，這使得這些獨生子女非常依賴于父母。 Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children，which_makes_the_children_rely_on_their_parents badly.(2013福建高考滿分作文) 3你知道，中國結(jié)非常受中國人的喜歡。 As_you_know，Chinese knots are very popular with Chinese people.(2013新課標全國卷

16、滿分作文) 4從短文中，我們會了解到一個善良的洗衣女工，盡管工資低但她決定用節(jié)省下的錢捐助一所大學一筆錢，希望可幫助到那些財政有困難的學生。 From the passage，we have learned that a kind laundry woman who_got_paid_lowly decided to donate to a university a great deal of money she_had_saved by living a simple life，hoping to help those students with financial problems.(20

17、14廣東高考滿分作文) 5我經(jīng)常想起被陌生人的言語傷害和侮辱的時候，甚至有時是來自熟悉的人。 I often think about the times when_I have felt_hurt and_insulted_by_rude_remarks_from_strangers and sometimes even from acquaintances. .請按以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇有關你的同學Kate的英語短文，盡可能多地使用定語從句。 1我有一個同學叫Kate，她的媽媽是我以前的英語老師。 2Kate是一個容易相處的人，我們都喜歡她。 3Kate在此次口語競賽中獲得第一名，這使得她媽媽很

18、高興。 4新年就要到了，到時Kate會和她媽媽一起去香港。 5眾所周知，香港是一個購物天堂，Kate打算在那里買她需要的東西。 【參考范文】 I_have_a_classmate_called_Kate，whose_mother_is my_former_English_teacher._Kate_is_a_girl_who_is_easy_to_get_along_with_and_we_all_like_her._Kate_took_the_first_place_in_the_Speech_Contest，which_makes_her_mother_happy._The_New_Year_is_coming，when Kate will_go to_Hong_Kong together with her mother. As we all know，Hong_Kong_is_a_shopping_paradise，where_Kate_intends_to_buy_what_she_needs.